
Once upon a time,Well about 3 weeks ago Christchurch was hit by a 6.3 magnitude earthquake on the richter scale at 12:51pm on the 22nd of february 2 days after after my birthday .
the ground was moving the students and teachers falling to the ground Tears dripping down lots of faces ,shock and fear in everyones eyes.
iIwas at school I was telling a story to my friends jumping up & down i thought it was myself but the dencity rised in seconds it was raining everyone was getting cold wet and wanted to get home as soon as possible the aftershock rocked the fort and looked as though the fort was going to collapsed .Parents bought food and blankets to do anything to help.Town was damaged and both cathedrals were crumbling and 165 citenzens confirmed dead, My friends mum and dad walked over dead people and lots were bleeding and cut , brused and broken.Power was cut out for hours , Schools were not open for weeks.My mum was working in a glass built building.At my mums work she sees at least 1 army tank a day, Christchurch is being treated like a war zone.
Everyone is trying to escape every chance they can get and traffic is like its never been seen before.
Stress is becoming common, fear is in no doubt everyone. School is becoming non paranormal.
iIhave a acrostic poem about the new and dissimproved christchurch
Christchurch
Has been
Ruined its
In desturction
So many Dead
Town is terrible
Crumbling bulidings everywhere
Horrible losses for families
Unbelievable sights
Relying on Your family to be there for you
Christchurch is no more
Have to say good bye to our Loved city
i cant think of anything else so bye and i hope you and your families are safe!!! :)
By Lauren Hall
the ground was moving the students and teachers falling to the ground Tears dripping down lots of faces ,shock and fear in everyones eyes.
iIwas at school I was telling a story to my friends jumping up & down i thought it was myself but the dencity rised in seconds it was raining everyone was getting cold wet and wanted to get home as soon as possible the aftershock rocked the fort and looked as though the fort was going to collapsed .Parents bought food and blankets to do anything to help.Town was damaged and both cathedrals were crumbling and 165 citenzens confirmed dead, My friends mum and dad walked over dead people and lots were bleeding and cut , brused and broken.Power was cut out for hours , Schools were not open for weeks.My mum was working in a glass built building.At my mums work she sees at least 1 army tank a day, Christchurch is being treated like a war zone.
Everyone is trying to escape every chance they can get and traffic is like its never been seen before.
Stress is becoming common, fear is in no doubt everyone. School is becoming non paranormal.
iIhave a acrostic poem about the new and dissimproved christchurch
Christchurch
Has been
Ruined its
In desturction
So many Dead
Town is terrible
Crumbling bulidings everywhere
Horrible losses for families
Unbelievable sights
Relying on Your family to be there for you
Christchurch is no more
Have to say good bye to our Loved city
i cant think of anything else so bye and i hope you and your families are safe!!! :)
By Lauren Hall
Nice recount. I also like your Actrostic poem.
ReplyDeleteNice recount Lauren....you made it kinda like a fairy tale!
ReplyDeleteI love how you told the story and the acrostic poem
ReplyDeletep.s my family is ok
WOW it was 2 days after you're b'day
ReplyDeletenice recount
ReplyDeletethanks every1 who commented
ReplyDeletenice recount awesome poem
ReplyDeletenice......=)
ReplyDeletenice poem
ReplyDeletei like the poem very much
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