One day the aliens invasion in Earth.
They drove the very big and many UFOs in Earth.
People were surprised and frightened.
The Earth soldiers were fighting with alien by guns and arrows.
Then they began to fighting.
The lasers and missiles are flew everywhere.
The many buildings, guns and arrow are broken.
Suddenly the Earth people's guns and arrows are began to burst.
They were lose.
The Earth people were despair and fear.
Later they live very hard because the aliens were make to work.
The aliens are how to stronger then Earth people there are hanging the CCTV on the meteorite and they control the meteorite to move around Earth by remote control and they look around the Earth and they found the Earth people's weakness and they attack the Earth people's weakness or they found the Earth people's strong points and they make their power stronger then Earth people and attack the Earth people.
The children called Arthur and Martina they are 10 years old.
They are good for make something.
Arthur said 'We can make some UFOs for fight with aliens.'
'But we didn't strong enough.' said Martina.
'But the adult people didn't here so let try ourselves.'
So they tried to made the some strong UFOs.
After eleven years they are did it!! They hung missiles too.
They test their UFOs. It was flied very good and next they test missiles too.
It was strong and filed very good.
After one weeks they are fought with aliens.
Arthur and Martina said 'Come on we make we are win for you.'
Soon they began to fight.
The aliens' UFOs' missiles couldn't through the Arthur and Martina's UFOs' side.
When Arthur and Martina are shoot the missiles by their UFOs they make big in the aliens' UFOs.
Suddenly the aliens' UFOs are began to burst.
The Earth people are began to cheering and said 'Hurray!!Hurray!!'
The Earth people become to strongest creature in the whole planet.
Arthur and Martina are become to hero.
By Michael Kang
Well done Michael
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Nice one Micheal but i think you should check your sentences.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Micheal and great pictures
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ReplyDeleteAwesome story Micheal, I liked your pictures
ReplyDeleteGood story the pictures are cool well done
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